Chaotic Romance

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Wow! I don't even know how to respond to you... I am not offended by your critique though. I have just never gotten such a thorough critique of my work, ...

I do agree with all the posts before mine... so I really have nothing to add... everyone already said everything!! Once this is flushed out and details are added it'll ...

Thank you very much for your comments! They are much appreciated! It's funny really, because I've posted this on several sites, and NO ONE has EVER mentioned those things to ...